17 Comments

  1. Sabrina 98 on May 28, 2019 at 12:24 pm

    wow. breathless beautiful

  2. qxotic1 on May 28, 2019 at 12:24 pm

    So powerful! I’m in tears…

  3. Shanika Safford on May 28, 2019 at 12:25 pm

    Nothing that a child never should have to go through. Nobody would ever understand why a person stay until you yourself go through it. I love this story

  4. Janette Duprey on May 28, 2019 at 12:33 pm

    You are a strong beautiful young lady with a purpose greater than we can understand. Thank you for speaking for all those children who cant.

  5. Charlie Deery on May 28, 2019 at 12:33 pm

    Powerful poem, thank you

  6. Elaine b on May 28, 2019 at 12:34 pm

    This poems hits so close to home she’s describing my home life perfectly… glad to know none of us are alone

  7. Madeline Nighthorse on May 28, 2019 at 12:35 pm

    Beautiful. I know what this is like. Little girl, six years old, bright eyes watching them fight. Watching with tear-filled eyes as they come for me, teeth bared, calloused hands, undone belt, hairbrush bristles, watching as they kill me and yet leave me living.

  8. Allahsha S on May 28, 2019 at 12:41 pm

    Yoooo deep!!!!

  9. Kim Sisto Robinson on May 28, 2019 at 12:44 pm

    WOWWWWWWWWWWW. POWERHOUSE.  LOVE. Thank you.

  10. Fiftys Lady on May 28, 2019 at 12:56 pm

    Wow what pain. This had me teary

  11. Betty ann on May 28, 2019 at 12:56 pm

    Chills. Way to go for speaking your truth girl! The way you so eloquently talked about domestic abuse and expressed so vividly what happened made me feel it in my bones.

  12. Auden on May 28, 2019 at 12:58 pm

    im sobbing

  13. Queen Jasmine Milan on May 28, 2019 at 1:00 pm

    Wow this is so deep!

  14. Said Inusah on May 28, 2019 at 1:04 pm

    What’s her name?

  15. Shadow Phace on May 28, 2019 at 1:16 pm

    I’m a poet too, and I cried because I remember my father abuse. This was amazing.

  16. Aurora H on May 28, 2019 at 1:21 pm

    That was awesome

  17. Amir Kaid on May 28, 2019 at 1:22 pm

    This is heartbreaking

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